Monday, April 20, 2009

Two New Chapters

You might notice the first chapter is labeled 44, the same as the previous last chapter. It's very short. I'm re-arranging again. There were two long chapters back to back on the crowd at Jim's apartment, I thought they needed to be broken up, and that we needed to catch up with Allen. "Tali" is now chapter 45. That's why I couldn't put these two in a single PDF file.

Chapter 46 is a good one, albeit a bit, um, explicit. It will make you want me to finish chapter 48. But 47 is one that folks have been waiting for, and that I keep pushing later. This time, for sure. It's time.

Chapter 45 - The Gap

Chapter 46 - Rocky Road